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Re: Needles and Roses - Chap. 1 (Edited)
This was a great chapter KJ! I like Rachel and I think you've developed her well in this very first chapter. Which for many people it is hard to do. ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Midnight to Dawn-Prologue
Note: I thought of a really good book idea this morning when I was sleep. It came from a video that happened to be on VH1 when I woke up. ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Happy Birthday YWS
Happy Birthday YWS By Angel of Death I missed you when you were one But I bet that year was fun They call it terrible two But I bet it ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Opinions Please!!
Thunder that was such a random post. Well anyways, You should go with something that is not obvious. Trying using a line from a poem or using something that is ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: The Dark Side of the Moon - Prologue
Hey Ash! First, before I point out a couple of problems, I must say that I love the title and this whole idea. You made Sophia a whole different person, ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: I just relized something else...
I loved the Matrix and I adore Keanu Reeves (and his name) Neo was a cool character and...well good luck with your story. ~Angel
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses - Prologue & Ch. 1
Well seeing as though I had read this the once before, I only can say that it gets better when you read it a second time. Also, your new idea ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: He Comes Before Night
Hello there, You have the idea in check, but you are just not executing it correctly. The repetition of words and short thoughts do not do any justice to the ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Favorite YWS Writing
My favorite novels: Because by KJ The Elephant Boy by Kylan Poisoned Roses by ashleylee Beautifully Evil by Jared By Sun, By Moon by KJ My favorite members: Areida, Kylan, ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: For all Eternity - Two
Hey Ash, Wow, I can't believe no one reviewed this. Before I get on with the review, I must say that this is a great story (if I already haven't ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: For all Eternity - One
Well, it looks like I'm hooked. Sorry it took me so long to read this, but I'm glad I decided to read it today. As always, your descriptions and dialog ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 9
Note: Because I am writing this for NaNo it is not edited and it might have a little bit more sentences and stuff in December when I can sit down ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Post Your NaNo Cover!
Here's a Movie Poster
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Favorite NaNo Bits and Pieces
That is beautiful Tigress. Here's another piece that I can not help but be proud of. And then with all his strength and power, he took Elizabeth's face into his ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when every word comes like a heartbeat When every voice and thought of your characters become your own When ever ink mark or erasing is ...
Nov 8, 2008
